I have an oral presentation tomorrow...... for my African Mask

wat do u think.....please revise or give me ideas on how to make it better!!! (I would appreciate it being longer too!)

Thank you so much!!!!:

The mask I made came from the African Punu Tribe. The African Punu tribal masks are painted white to represent the spirits of the dead ancestors during funerals. Some of the masks also represented the beauty of the Punu women. To make my mask, I applied a paper mache mix of newspaper, water, and flour on a balloon and once it dried I popped the balloon. Then, I covered the mask with plaster on the outside and inside so that it was sturdy enough. I painted it a crème color to make it look aged. Over that, I painted it darker in certain places and added mecca flakes when it was still wet. Also, to make the top of it, I used hand-made paper and added a metallic gold paint to it. I folded it and then stuck it through the top.